Building Tension in a Scene: “The Queen’s Gambit” by Walter Tevis

Diane Callahan
8 min readFeb 2, 2022

“Suspenseful” is not how I’d describe a game of chess, but Walter Tevis’s 1983 novel The Queen’s Gambit is the exception. The incredible popularity of the Netflix show, which is a beat-for-beat adaptation of the book, proves that the source material succeeds in creating narrative tension.

“Tension” can be defined as “inner striving, unrest, or imbalance.” A question remains unresolved, or two opposing forces are at odds. Readers crave tension because it creates anticipation — what will happen next? This uncertainty keeps us reading until we feel that satisfying rush of resolution.

The dictionary definition of “tension”: “inner striving, unrest, or imbalance often with physiological indication of emotion”

In The Queen’s Gambit, one of the most tense scenes is the climactic game between the protagonist Beth Harmon and her rival Vasily Borgov. Beth has lost twice to Borgov, so the Moscow Invitational is her chance to redeem herself — the personal stakes are high.

Spoilers for The Queen’s Gambit ahead!

The Queen’s Gambit movie book cover overlaid on a chessboard

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Diane Callahan
Diane Callahan

Written by Diane Callahan

Fiction writer and editor, a.k.a. YouTuber Quotidian Writer. www.quotidianwriter.com

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